Pros: Gripping climax sets up future stories
Cons: Overly long; Harry's anger
The Bottom Line:
Needed some edits
Builds as the book progresses
Advances mail plot
Harry Potter and the Curse of Too Many Pages
By the time the Harry Potter series came to my attention,
book four was out. I was put off by how many pages it was. Then this book came
out and had even more. Even with as much as I love reading and how fast I read,
the idea of talking a book almost 900 pages long really put me off. I'd love to
say that I was proved wrong, but Harry Potter And The Order Of The Phoenix could have used some pruning.
Since this is book five in the series, it assumes you
already know about the characters and the universe they inhabit. Yes, some
things are explained, but most of the time the explanation wouldn't be enough
if you weren't already familiar with the stories. My advice? Don't start here
but at the beginning. Otherwise, you'll be lost long before this epic is even
getting warmed up.
I am also going to discuss this book as if you've read the
previous four books. That means I may spoil events from them. If you haven't
read the books and would like to unspoiled, stop now.
This book picks up not too long after the cliffhanger ending
of book four. Harry is with his relatives for the summer, desperately trying to
learn any news from the wizarding world.
You'd think that a major news event like the reappearance of
He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named would be major news in the wizard world. Harry is
shocked to learn that this just isn't the case. No news at all is showing up in
the Daily Prophet, and Harry is beginning to wonder what is going on.
When he does learn something, it isn't good. Lord Voldemort
is lying low, trying to build his strength. And the Ministry of Magic is
denying everything that Harry and Hogwarts Headmaster Dumbledore claimed when
the summer began.
But soon Harry has other things to worry about. Since he's
starting his fifth year at Hogwarts, his OWLs (Ordinary Wizarding Level exams)
are coming at the end of the year and he's got extra homework to prepare for
them. And two of the fifth years will be prefects. Ron has joined the
Gryffindor Quidditch team, but he's really struggling with it. And the new
Ministry appointed Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher is teaching them
nothing while tormenting everyone at the school.
Even stranger are Harry's recurring dreams. He's walking
down a dark corridor toward a locked door. But he can never enter that door.
And when he wakes up, his scar is killing him. What does it mean?
As I said, this book had serious pacing issues. I was
actually encouraged when it started off with a bang. It started much faster
then the others had, and I was hoping that was a sign of things to come.
Unfortunately, there were too many sub-plots here. While most of them were
important, I got tired of some of them long before the climax. This was
especially true of the romantic sub-plot. Even the stories that were important
got dragged out. The same things kept happening with the results getting
slightly worse. Basically, I got bored waiting for the climax to being.
As I expected, the climax started early, and once it did,
things got good again. I read the final 200 pages in one afternoon I got so
hooked by the action. Now that's not to say I liked it all. There was one part
that really upset me. Not sure if it's important for later books or not, but
surely there could have been some way around it.
Making things worse, Harry wasn't as likable as in previous
books. He really seemed to have a chip on his shoulder. Yes, at times he had
legitimate reasons to be upset. But quite often he was flying off the handle
for no good reason. Half the time I sympathized and half the time I wanted to
smack some sense into him. Fortunately, he mellows out as the year progresses,
so I could go back to rooting for him full time. Ron and Hermione were their
usual supportive selves. In fact, they treated Harry better then I felt like
treating him. Everyone else was their normal selves as well. Some you like and
some you love to hate. One character seems to have made a surprising change,
but I expect that to be dealt with more in later books.
This book sets up the next one, so it is vital reading. And
the climax was engaging enough to redeem some of the slower parts. But Harry Potter And The Order Of The Phoenix could have used a good edit to streamline the whole thing.
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